Throughout the semester, I progressively learned virtually
everything I need to know to make my writing stronger by
proving my thesis with credible information. I learned how
to find that information, how to determine the relevance
and credibility of that information, how to incorporate the
information into my writing, and how to properly cite the
source. This will prove to be a very useful understanding
in future years, as I have to write my senior thesis and
other research papers.
The culmination of all the practice for supporting our
argument came at the end of the semester, as we were
assigned to research a topic of our choice and write an
8-10 page paper about that. The project was stressful, to
say in the least, but was very beneficial to my overall
writing talent and capabilities. The essay reinforced
everything I had always been taught, but rarely done in
such a meticulous fashion. Most times, teachers expect
citations in their students’ papers simply to enforce
anti-plagiarism ethics, but with this research paper, it
was more than that. The sources I chose to use as evidence
in my essay served as the foundation of my
paper—without them, I would have nothing.
When I first started the brainstorming process, I had
no idea what to write my paper about, and that I
did not want to write about a cliché topic such as abortion
of affirmative action. It wasn't until my economics
professor mentioned something about outsourcing that I
realized what I wanted to research. I decided to write
about the growing economies in China and India, as well as
a potential future military threat from China. Needless to
say, it was not the most fun topic to write about, but I
chose it anyways. The topic had always interested me, and I
felt that I, along with the majority of other college-aged
Americans, knew virtually nothing about the topic. Sure,
everyone has heard his/her fair share of theories as to
when World War III will take place between the U.S. and
China, but I felt that there was so much to learn that had
never been discussed in the American public school system.
Out of sheer coincidence, my dad gave me a book later that
week that he said I should read. The name of the book was
The World is Flat by Thomas L. Friedman. Finding
myself bored senseless one Sunday afternoon, I sat down and
read the book front to back. I was amazed at much of the
information discussed by Friedman. He discussed the effect
of recent technological advancements on the U.S. economy,
as well as those of China and India; he talked about the
globalization that email and high-speed internet have
recently created, and how easy it has become to outsource
virtually any kind of jobs to foreign countries for much
cheaper; he noted the effect of government on a
nation's economy. I decided I would use the
information acquired from this book as a base for my
research. I wanted to look more into the global
economy, and what affect it might have on the U.S.
I found a number of other sources, most of whom were scholars on
the topic (economics professors, military advisors,
etc…). The sources all provided some excellent
information about the topic, but often too technical
and complex. In order to be able to convey the
information to my target audience, I realized I would
have to analyze the information in detail, and filter
out many of the things that were too complex or not
especially important. For every source I found to support my
thesis, I would need to find a source to explain what
the other was trying to say.
If you read my research essay, you will see how I
incorporated a wide range of sources, most of whom have
intriguing and unique opinions, into the topic of the
paragraph, and the general thesis as well. I tried to avoid
paraphrasing many of the quotes of my sources, as I feel
they said it better than I ever could, and thus would have
a greater impact on my audience.